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Night Party

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Artwork for mini-contest "Night Patry"
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First of all, this looks good as a thumbnail, wich is really good because that will attract more viewers.
The color balance between the blue and red is nice but the composition of the picture as a whole is somehow of balance, to be exact it feels a bit heavy to the left.

The foreground stands out nicely (and I'm sure you meant it to stand out) but the background seems a little separated from the rest of the picture.
The name of the piece is "night party" and so the background obviously plays a meaningfull part to get the idea across but the picture would work without it, although the feeling would change.
Also, it seems like the FG & BG have a different light source, so maybe that is why they seem to be two different pictures
I like how the pinkish red parts have a glowing quality of their own.

Suggestions
(because I view a digital paintings as something you can go back on and improve and change)

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red"/>you could think about the composition of the piece or how to crop it more efficiently.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue"/> To study how light reflects on the surfaces farther away from the light source.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black"/> a piece is always as strong as its weakest part, so every detail is important <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>.

I can see that you have technique and an eye for desing and colours, keep on doing what you do and improving your skills.
I sincerely hope that you can derive some benefit from this critique.